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Cursed Intuition
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Cursed Intuition |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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This body is but A house for the soul Within The curtains are pulled And the darkness Of late Makes me shudder In complete contempt For my fears I fear not failure For I have been there Before I fear not hate For I have hated And been hated on I fear not death For it is but a ride To something better My fears of present Are rooted in Loss and loneliness My intuition tells me That someone must go And I fear which it shall be I am already alone |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this is very powerful, i am sorry you feel so alone...  "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
oh gosh...how sad. Makes me want to cry. "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"My fears of present Are rooted in Loss and loneliness" ~ Susan, I cannot bear to see someone feeling so lost and alone. I'll put a nice pot of tea on for us and we can have a real good woman to woman chit chat! And to sweeten my offer, I will serve us up some of my famous homemade chocolate chip cookies! That should make us both feel better!  Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sorry..I didn't mean to make anyone sad.. [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (09-19-2003 01:41 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Susan, I know of these feelings too, but you're not alone.Sometimes people can't come to there senses and do the most simplest things, such as pick up a phone.Remember my friend, you are never alone for you have the family at Passions and an eternal friend in me.If you ever need anything even just to talk or vent email me.I'm always willing to listen with an open ear and an open heart. May your heart be filled with light and joy.  Crystal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it...and went back again we'll be okay, some day |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Well done Susan. You really made me stand up and take notice with this one. I read the responses you have already typed and I hope your mom is okay. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
We'll all be okay.. Keep writing. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I really REALLY like this. for my library and stuff And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oh god woman, this did not make me sad, this made me feel sane. I need this today. This is amazing, Icould never have written how it feels the way you have. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Crystal~Sweets! Thank you I will keep that in mind. Dixie~Of course we will...until then, we write..love you lady Evo~Thank you. Talked to Mom last night, she has a sore boob and will get the results Monday... Meg~Yes we will...love you Liz~Thank you  Gemma~lol of course you can and better if I may say so!! Susan |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
"My intuition tells me That someone must go And I fear which it shall be I am already alone" all too well Susan... all too well..I know this |
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