Sips ................choka

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Open Poetry #28

Sips ................choka

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

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Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-09-18 06:58 PM

Sips

lift you so gently...
you are water in my hand...
my lips...liquid touch...
tiny sips of you....such care...
...as you slip through my fingers

~~J

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (09-18-2003 07:00 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-18 07:08 PM

Ooooh myyyy!!! Wonderful.
Simply exquisite!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2003-09-18 09:06 PM

Jamie...So tenderly you touch the feeling in this. Lovely love!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-09-18 09:22 PM

So much tenderness, so incredibly romantic... but the last line leaves a feeling of loss? This is loving and lovely... beautiful work!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-18 10:34 PM

(sigh) I too felt a tinge of sadness in the closing line, but this is soooooooo beautifully romantic too, sweet friend, God Bless You, your words shine with magic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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