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Wheels Of The Mill (with mark v sheldon)
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Wheels Of The Mill (with mark v sheldon) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Wheels Of The Mill by: Helen Slicker and Mark V Sheldon Round and round and round it goes It never stops it always flows Someone always thinks they know Making up how the HOT AIR blows Churning, turning, burning to find out WHAT’S between is all about Gabbing, jabbing, fabricating lies Frankensteining fantasies to life "Isle of view" becomes "I love you" And "Luv -- your serve" "I love you, Sir" Spinning, threading, needles point at you When you see things in a different view Caught in the rhythm of did you hear Who is holding someone so near Fabricating tapestries, colored and fake Picking a thread in which to take Comments, thoughts, and innocent replies JUST WHAT DOES IT ALL imply? Boredom rampant, nothing left to do What is the truth? Don't you wish you knew... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Chuckling here, even though it may not be so humorous in 3D reality. A very, very good write. Thanks to both of you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 so true...nice work, you two M |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Enjoyed this. I always wonder, though, with these duets, who wrote what? Is the goal to let that show or to hide it? I'm not sure which I prefer, actually. The truth, never-the-less, is up to you. Kraw' |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great work from 2 great poets. Jason |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic Helen and Mark! Much enjoyed the read...and ain't it the truth! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing work, you two!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ahhhhh.... THAT mill! LOL You've spotlighted it in all it's "glory" so well! *S* This is a delightful duet... you write well together! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh my gosh, this is such a wise and beautifully eloquent duet, sweet friend, I believe lying is the biggest sin of all and all who have lied should confess immediately before they get condembed forever with guilt and remorse! (sad sigh) You speak of the absent truth so well, sweet friends, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Helen and Mark, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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