Touch Me ..........cinquain

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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-09-18 03:32 PM

Touch me,
Oh touch again,
Lift me over the heights,
Bring me back to paradise; just
Touch me....

--J

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (09-18-2003 03:32 PM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-09-18 04:09 PM

Truth is...their touch is part of what makes you whole...without that life seems empty.

Shara

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-18-2003 04:10 PM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-09-18 04:10 PM

Okay! lol

EA

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-09-18 04:50 PM

Well done! The cinquain is an art-form all to itself, and you have mastered it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-09-18 05:05 PM

Okay...if you like.

Well done!
`Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-09-18 05:08 PM

oh can I after Nancy? Please? hehe

beautiful Jamie. A wonderfully written Cinquain.

M

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-09-18 05:30 PM

You convey so much yearning and passion in so few words... very effectively, if the responses are any indication! *G*

This is absolutely beautiful, Jamie... *S*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-18 11:13 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so beautifully sensual and lovely, sweet friend, and may your heart forever be touched by the rose petals of love! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!