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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-09-16 08:44 AM

The dust….
Subsiding,  whisked away by a zephyr of ocean breath,
now seen beyond the knoll.   Her heart frantically
reaching out in it’s less than subtle declaration of
yearn and desire,   of passion and fire.

Shall this be the eve of his return?  When the candles
burning bright start to sag in their melt,  the flicker
blending with the eyes of purest blue that look into
the distance through a stained window…..waiting.

My Lord,  do thee not know of my yearn and ache
for thy warmth upon me?   Can not thee see the furl
of finest cloth beyond the rise?   I await,  my Lord.
Most anxiously.   Come now my love,  come now.

Battle,  that cruel and silent companion of many,
that bearer of sorrow and tears.   Why must the
lands be covered in crimson of noble hearts?
Why must it be?

My Lord,  the trees grow upon the hillside.  Shade
of the sun awaits thee.   My basket full,  a hunger
to slate,   Your lips my hands will feed.

Oh come my Love,   my lord and life
Oh come my Love….just to me.
I will wait all these days,  your chosen wife.
I will wait,  I will wait for thee.

And far away,  beyond the knoll and sight,
Another hums a tune of desire and yearn.
Flaxen hair and taunting eyes,  sensing the
time is near.

Oh come my Knight,   I wait for thee
My loins yearn to feel you now.
Oh come my Knight,  passionately.
To you I most humbly bow.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (09-16-2003 09:08 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-16 08:49 AM

mercy!

(chuckling).... what is in your morning coffee anyway????

Nicely done Barry.. nice indeed

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-09-16 08:50 AM

Magnus
WOW, I don't give too many of those.
Excellent write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-09-16 09:20 PM

The feel of this reminds me of the journeys often taken by youth...the choices, and longing that drives so much of lives.
Well done by a master craftsman...Bump.
TD

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-16 09:26 PM

Was it the dream, Sire, the dream, again?
Rest, and rest well, for on the morrow,
she will return.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-17 12:17 PM

Whatever you're having, I want some.

Into my library this goes.

Crystal

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-09-17 11:53 AM

Caught between the calls of love and war... This is excellent!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-17 12:02 PM

Oh come my Love,   my lord and life
Oh come my Love….just to me.
I will wait all these days,  your chosen wife.
I will wait,  I will wait for thee.

Oh my, Barry....this is so beautiful.
You really are a hopeless romantic at heart, you know.

Hugs

Ethel

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-09-17 12:13 PM

As I read this I went back, and forth between a damsel, or maiden waiting on her knight, and the other thought was the women waiting for their husbands to come back from the war being fought. Either way I can hear her thoughts, and the hunger for her love's touch, and his voice. Lovely, lovely words! Just beautiful. And I'm not going to forget to click library this time. This was the most wonderful thing. Filled with romance!!! Thanks so much for sharing.

comes to mind. hehe

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-17-2003 12:14 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-09-18 04:41 AM

Nice writing...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-09-18 04:06 PM

I could read you forever...

EA

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-09-18 11:20 PM

(sigh) Oh Barry, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too felt such intense yearning in these words that can relate to so many today and yesterday and may every dreamer find a love to cherish forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2003-09-19 06:34 PM

This is a song written by a soul who knows life and love and who yearns to feel again the supreme Divine touch.
So beautiful.
Love, Margherita

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

13 posted 2003-09-19 08:10 PM

Fabulous,,,

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

14 posted 2003-09-19 08:23 PM

Barry, how wonderful to read your words. This is excellent...

Hugs and smiles, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

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