Open Poetry #28 |
Moon Shadows (A duet with Ceinwyn) |
Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
She stepped out from beneath the trees Faerie wings in tact, senses alert, Bathed eerily in the moon shadows Celestial rays intoxicating her soul She came alive in the mid of night Laughing, flirting, kissing Dancing in the moon shadows Embracing the sweet intoxicatio Tempting the Lupine God Calling him out of his celestial palace To join her in her moon shadows Hopeful, prayerful, joyful Knowing her love brings him forth Confessing her soul upon his lips As his celestial fingers Run through her hair Slowly, lovingly, he lays her down On a bed of his moon shadows Their souls intertwining He smiles his love in her eyes And as he gives her a final kiss One last embrace he ascends on high She awakes surrounded by moon shadows And, gazing longingly into his eyes, Steps back into the trees We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO, a sensual beautiful duet! An enjoyable write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very nice pairing of poets. Nicely done. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful duet, sweet Bradly and Kristen, I love fantasy and romance soooooooo much and this made me smile imagining romance in the middle of a fairy world, sweet friend, God Bless You Both, I'm adding this to my angel library, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Kristen and Bradly, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful duet you two!! Reminded me of the Cat Stevens song Moon Shadow. Wonderful blending of ink from two of our finest! ~Hugs & Smiles to you both, Nancy~
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Midnitesun- Thank you. Magnus- Thanks for the kind words. Noah- I'me very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. Nancy- Kind words from youa re always appreciated. I would also like to thank Kris for making this such an easy and pleasurable experience. She is what made this wrote so enjoyable. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
you all are sooo sweet and Brad..you're welcome but thank you for humoring me! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-20-2003 02:33 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Are you certain that there were two of you writing this exquisite piece of fantasmagorical writing? & Linda |
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