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Brisk Insanity (Ceinwyn and Littlewing)
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Brisk Insanity (Ceinwyn and Littlewing) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Sighing seas, cemetary breeze whispering within my hair waves of despair saturating my waking dreams A fine line crossed and measured tossled amidst brisk insanity whipping wind within this frame, frail Goddess inviting, sea to shore uniting I see the sky... dank, dark ground, the goddess making a mockery of the pain when I should be the one laughing... I taste her embrace upon tip of tongue whilst I attempt to trod spirit held up high it is futile to try denying this echo of mind to heart to soul to sky A mighty steed in the distance . . . trip-tropping to me . . . fierce as the wind soft as the breeze Her breath, my sustenance brings life to me . . . "Seize every action above and below. Smell it upon the wind wafting through the trees. For once, in this life, do not bend nor break to the breeze. You are finally free ." [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-05-2003 02:33 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
...breathtaking, I'm speechless... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sighing seas, cemetary breeze whispering within my hair waves of despair saturating my waking dreams A fine line crossed and measured tossled amidst brisk insanity whipping wind within this frame, frail Goddess inviting, sea to shore uniting I see the sky... dank, dark ground, the goddess making a mockery of the pain when I should be the one laughing... I taste her embrace upon tip of tongue whilst I attempt to trod spirit held up high it is futile to try denying this echo of mind to heart to soul to sky A mighty steed in the distance . . . trip-tropping to me . . . fierce as the wind soft as the breeze ============================= you two create a wonderful poetic intensity and chemistry with this vivid write... love the imagery and personification. very cool dueting of talent groovy poets!!  When was the last time you felt this high, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nice ladies! Atmospheric and evokative...Just the waay I like it...hehe Ed "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sue shall I do the honours? just breeeeeeeatttthhheee & thanks Kaoru, JM & Ed  and I think I speak for Sue as well??PS Sue thanks for humoring me by doing the duet thingy wif moi.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-09-2003 06:10 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An insane duet? Say it's not so!  This is wonderful! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wow! Incredible...I am saving this and you can't stop me!! Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Sue and Kristen, this is such a gorgeous duet, sweet friends, and if you are calling to call it insane, at least call it beautifully insane because above and below you bring such vibrant colors and fine imagery together! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You Bith, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Kristen and Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This breathed so much fresh air into my lungs--and spirit!--I shall have no need to take a breath for another week!!! Each of you take a bow and kiss the mirror for me!   & Linda |
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