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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-09-05 02:31 PM

Sighing seas, cemetary breeze
whispering within my hair
waves of despair
saturating my waking dreams

A fine line crossed and measured
tossled amidst brisk insanity
whipping wind within this frame, frail

Goddess inviting, sea to shore uniting

I see the sky...
dank, dark ground,
the goddess making a mockery of the pain
when I should be the one laughing...

I taste her embrace upon tip of tongue
whilst I attempt to trod
spirit held up high
it is futile to try
denying
this echo
of mind
to heart to soul to sky

A mighty steed in the distance . . .
trip-tropping to me . . .
fierce as the wind
soft as the breeze

Her breath, my sustenance
brings life to me . . .

"Seize every action
above and below.
Smell it upon the wind
wafting through the trees.
For once, in this life,
do not bend
nor break to the breeze.

You
are
finally
free ."

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-05-2003 02:33 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-05 03:15 PM

...breathtaking,
I'm speechless...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-09-05 09:19 PM

Sighing seas, cemetary breeze
whispering within my hair
waves of despair
saturating my waking dreams

A fine line crossed and measured
tossled amidst brisk insanity
whipping wind within this frame, frail

Goddess inviting, sea to shore uniting

I see the sky...
dank, dark ground,
the goddess making a mockery of the pain
when I should be the one laughing...

I taste her embrace upon tip of tongue
whilst I attempt to trod
spirit held up high
it is futile to try
denying
this echo
of mind
to heart to soul to sky

A mighty steed in the distance . . .
trip-tropping to me . . .
fierce as the wind
soft as the breeze
=============================

you two create a wonderful poetic intensity and chemistry with this vivid write...
love the imagery and personification.
very cool dueting of talent groovy poets!!

When was the last time you felt this high,
you are the best I've ever felt.
Its so wrong not to be with you
Its getting harder to stay away.

SH

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2003-09-06 12:21 PM

Very nice ladies!

Atmospheric and evokative...Just the waay I like it...hehe

Ed

"In looking Northward, I see a light"

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2003-09-09 06:09 PM

Sue shall I do the honours?

just breeeeeeeatttthhheee

& thanks
Kaoru, JM & Ed

and I think I speak for Sue as well??

PS

Sue thanks for humoring me by doing the duet thingy wif moi..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-09-2003 06:10 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-09-20 10:38 AM

An insane duet? Say it's not so!

This is wonderful!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-20 10:47 AM

Wow! Incredible...I am saving this and you can't stop me!!

Susan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-20 02:45 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue and Kristen, this is such a gorgeous duet, sweet friends, and if you are calling to call it insane, at least call it beautifully insane because above and below you bring such vibrant colors and fine imagery together! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You Bith, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Kristen and Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-09-20 03:52 PM

This breathed so much fresh air into my lungs--and spirit!--I shall have no need to take a breath for another week!!!

Each of you take a bow and kiss the mirror for me!

&

Linda

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