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What I Would Do
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What I Would Do |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHAT I WOULD DO” by Bill Charles ~~~~ If I were to whisper to you tonight, some tender words of what I would do, would you sigh to me with softness, from deep within for me to continue… If I touched you with fingers soft, and your spine tingled with delight, would you then kiss me with yearning, to say to me that this we do is alright… If I knew your bosom under a loving moon, and your being filled complete with desire, would you love me now, and into tomorrow, as you burn with a lover’s passionate fire… ~~~~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Bill...you did it again! Excuse me...I am going back for another read. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very sensual Bill... Much enjoyed the warmth of this piece. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is beautiful...and very passionate. You romantic, you.... you did very good!!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 gorgeous and heart warming as usual  always a pleasure to read you. gem xxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...As always, a romantic and passionate poem with just the right amount of heat. ****Ivy Rose |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Such pretty words that would melt that right girls heart...So sweet, and warm!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-03-2003 10:04 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill I have been absent from PIP for far too long and I know I have missed many of your beautiful poems. I'm so glad I found this one though and I see you haven't lost your touch. I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooo, very sensual write here BC...questions bring to mind answers |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice thoughts,,, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nice nice nice you keep writing them and you will have your answers and most possibly they will be the answers that you wish for...  regards sudhir |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, Bill, you're a master of romance. Well done, sir -- well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bill, You sure do know what women like... Susan C. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
So did she say ... YES? Mercy if not then she is a fool *wink* Enjoyed this sensuous read, dear Sir. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill, I can just see you under my balcony serenading me...wonderful it would be  You are such a romantic... hugs M |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Bill, with a heart and soul like your's she'd be crazy to say no.You've doen it again angelblueyes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, to love and be loved like that is a treasure beyond words...how lovely your write your heart....you are indeed blessed. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
snow on the roof but still smoke in that fire BC |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC Your questions of passion and love are well written. You certainly have all the females swooning. It is quite the talent to write what is in your heart so well. Ariana |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Every woman who reads this exquisite poem of love, would wish it were written for her! Lovin' hugs, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
What? This isnt for me Linda???? LOL well I am claiming it . . . Bill, you are a beautiful soul xxoo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Well, BC, the King of Romance is at it again! What a delightful read this morning, adding a little romantic interlude to my day...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww...this is bound to make any woman's heart melt, sweet friend, you always write such gorgeous, romantic poetry with soft blues that makes such a musical magic spell! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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