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Open Poetry #28

Lovers

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-06 04:27 PM

Lovers

Jet planes fly by
upon cloud filled skies.

Sailboats pitch and move from
side to side taking seasoned
sailors on silky rides.

Closer in, surfers ride
swollen waves with friends.

Graceful palm trees enjoy
the kiss of ocean breeze.

At end of day a pink sunset
takes the breath away.

Tiki lights glow to provide
a romantic light show.

Scattered stars
and a half moon
fill Hawaiian skies.

Young lovers kiss,
old lovers sigh.

JamesLee
August06
2003

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-08-06 04:48 PM

Wow james, that was like a panoramic view, and a beautiful one.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-08-06 04:49 PM

well penned and enjoyed the read,,,

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-08-06 05:53 PM

What a nice feel to this one James...
could feel the island breeze in the evening...nice. TD

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-08-06 06:08 PM

Wow....thanks for taking me on a trip to the islands..hehehe and I didn't even have to buy a ticket. This was really nice.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-09-09 12:59 PM

Thank you for the lovely responses...James

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