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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-08-07 10:13 PM

{From the notebook}

~~~~~
From  love you
    find strength,

In the gentleness
    of your arms is
where I long to be,

The love I feel in my
    soul, you will feel when
your heart beats

Letting go, is a moment
     of longing from a place
I never knew could

exist

~~~~~~~~~~~~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-07-2003 10:16 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-08-07 10:28 PM

I remember that feeling..no..wait i don't...blah

Lovely writing as always but never enough of it.. keep them coming

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-08-07 10:39 PM

Greeneyes - oh yes, for sure...

BC

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2003-08-07 10:40 PM

Letting go, is a moment
of longing from a place
I never knew could

exist
======================

*whispering yesssssss*
(youknowthatiknowthatyouknowiknow)

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-08-07 11:45 PM

The love I feel in my
soul, you will feel when
your heart beats

Oh Lauren, I do love this!!ALL of it..

Hugs

Ethel

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-08-08 10:22 AM

Aye, this is the truth of it....and you can spread out that notebook of yours anytime -- good stuff in there!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-08-08 10:34 AM

one of your best

loved it

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2003-08-08 11:18 AM

sister of heart,
miss you so.....

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2003-08-08 11:19 AM

Letting go, is a moment
of longing from a place
I never knew could

exist

I know it exist now..

This was beautiful and so is that picture.

Susan C.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2003-08-08 11:21 AM

your poetry is always so touching...h

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2003-08-08 11:30 AM

sorry hon, been gone so long I forgot.

click for the library....

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2003-08-08 11:45 AM

Lauren

"Letting go, is a moment
of longing from a place
I never knew could

exist"

You are always so beautiful

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

12 posted 2003-08-08 12:33 PM

yes...beautiful *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

13 posted 2003-08-08 12:34 PM

Your writing is always wonderful.
angelblueyes

*Nui$@nce*
New Member

since 2003-08-07

Posts 7
out of my mind

14 posted 2003-08-08 12:52 PM

dat made a guy wanna cry.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

15 posted 2003-08-08 02:10 PM

is alright by me --

yeah (sing it al green)

nice notebook

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

16 posted 2003-09-19 05:25 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, it's so funny, when I started reading this, I thought of that John Mayer song "Back To You" and surely enough, part of the lyrics is right there in your signature, yay! (kiss on cheek) It's good to have faith in holding onto love and loving and try to disbelieve it being taken away, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2003-09-19 05:33 PM

Lauren, you have such a beautifully soft
touch to your poetry...always a pleasure
to read.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

18 posted 2003-09-19 08:40 PM

It seems
   so long ago

these dreams
   that come and go

the strength
   that one should know

what length
   a heart would grow
          ... inspired, once again ...

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-19-2003 08:41 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

19 posted 2004-10-09 11:04 AM

Suede
Junior Member

since 2003-08-25

Posts 38
Drifting on the soul

20 posted 2005-01-16 09:06 AM

The last stanza, i knew so well! Lovely write! Peace and Love

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