Open Poetry #28 |
Touching |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Touching When I touch you I like what I touch. If it's alright with you I'm going to keep on touching you until I touch your heart and your soul. We'll share days of wine and roses, we'll know splendor in the grass, we'll stay together until the end of never, that's how long love can last. JamesLee August04 2003 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice concept, or should I say dream |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that's how long love can last. ditto on dixiecups |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You speak of love so well.I hope we all find this kind of love on our lifetimes. angelblueyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you passing shadow, inkedgoddess and angelblueyes for the nice response... Yes, love can last a lifetime...the hard part is finding two people that want it for that length of time...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh yes, the "touch" ... so very important in sharing ones feelings, a slight brush here a hand held there ... *sigh* ... ya gotta love it. I agree love can go on forever IF two work on it. And yes this one "touched" me. *smile* always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sweet one. Lovely thoughts. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
nicely expressed James, togetheness to the end , is the balance of give and take with an even blend Hope |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
James, so beautifully penned. Puts cynics to shame. Maggie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ You've touched me with a huge *sigh* Beautiful, sir~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice..now if only it were true... *s M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank each one of you for the nice responses...for some this is true and for some it is a desire and for some it seems very far away...yes it does take two with similar desires...James |
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