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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2003-09-17 10:52 PM



When my cup is full,
I offer all I have to you.

When my cup is empty,
it fills with loving thoughts of you.

This has always been my life,
before you found me
always you were with me;
before you were born in this life,
when I did not understand,
always you were with me.

Every day,
in the between times,
being asleep
being awake,
between each heartbeat
with every breath you take,
feel me inside you;
in the morning
when the Raven calls,
in your soul
where your dreams still live,
I am with you.

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-09-17 10:54 PM


a most beautiful dream for many..excellent
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-09-17 10:58 PM


Icy~

You must be able to see inside my head!  

I know your words.

Susan

Martie
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3 posted 2003-09-17 10:59 PM


icebox...The feeling behind these words is so beautiful.  

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-09-18 12:01 PM


enjoyed the penning,,,

                                

MorninGlory
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5 posted 2003-09-18 12:06 PM


This is wonderful, speaks of a love everlasting, the strongest kind, I just love this! It is so nice to be loved. No place else I'd rather be.

~ becky

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6 posted 2003-09-18 12:29 PM


Touching....going to read this again, very slowly...take a lesson in how to say.....

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angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-09-18 01:56 AM


I can feel your heart in this and it's so wonderful.
Crystal

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8 posted 2003-09-18 10:58 AM


in your soul
where your dreams still live,
I am with you.

When that's your reality, no fantasy is needed... you've found something priceless. Beautiful work!

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2003-09-18 11:12 AM


icebox - words of caring at their finest...

BC

KristieSue
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10 posted 2003-09-18 11:18 AM


such a lucky woman...to have such love.

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

vandana
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11 posted 2003-09-18 11:21 AM


enjoyed
icebox
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in the shadows
12 posted 2003-09-18 05:23 PM


Thank you all for your comments.  I appreciate them all.  I know in the past month I have not always responded to readers' replies and comments, but I do read them and value them all.  This place holds one of the most supportive group of people I have ever encountered.

Thanks, again.


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