If thought breached confidentiality.....

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-17 03:32 PM

Imagine
if thought
were to breach
confidentiality
contract
with sound

would you
hear
me speak
your name

through
every
interval
between
tic and toc

would you know
the
skin
of my internal
words
newborn
upon
your
ears

Instant karma's gonna get you.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (09-17-2003 03:35 PM).]

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-17 03:35 PM

Amazing, as always

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-09-17 03:42 PM

Damn.... now this is indeed something to save...

marvelous work Dahhhling.... just mahhhvelous

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-09-17 03:55 PM

love and admire you both, thankyou for your kind words.

strange thoughts come into yer head whilst washing your hair...i wrote this one, with my head upside down, as i dripped wet soapy hair on my bedroom floor trying to find a pen n paper before i forgot it. I looked like a crazed drowned rat

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-17 04:08 PM

Gemma! As a personal who lives
in a world of confidentiality,
I can't begin to tell you how much
this hit home! I've often wondered
"what if" people could hear my thoughts...

I think to think in a whisper!

Excellent!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-09-17 09:32 PM

Gemma~
I read this ... and was going to leave a reply WITHOUT reading the other replies ... but THEN I saw you had already responded, so I paused to read yours ...

LOL !
Now I'm laughing sooooo hard at the picture of you, lathered head and all, groping for pen and paper !!!
I'll have to come back tomorrow !!!
Oh my gawd girl ... you've got me SO LAUGHING~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

6 posted 2003-09-17 10:03 PM

oh... we'd all be in SUCH trouble...

cute Gem

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-09-17 10:59 PM

well it beats you being on the toilet running around with you pants around your ankles no?

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2003-09-17 11:01 PM

"would you know
the
skin
of my internal
words"

I would have done the same in order to get those words down!

Susan

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-09-17 11:09 PM

LOL...I think I may have run naked through the entire house looking for a pen and paper to get these wonderful words down...amazing..just amazing.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2003-09-17 11:25 PM

TIC  (yes)  TOC


     TIC  (I)  TOC

  TIC  (would)  TOC

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

11 posted 2003-09-17 11:28 PM

A welcome grin. There's always a fingertip and the steam on the bathroom mirror...

-MVS

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