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My Dear Lothario
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My Dear Lothario |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Speak unto me, not discourteously, for I be among the manor borne. Do ye not know in whose shadow ye stand ever so haughtily? If I so chooseth, I mightst smite the grin from thy smirking face with but one swipe of mine scorned hand! Come! Come closer and speak of thy intentions. Be they of the carnal pleasures of mine flesh?--for I know 'tis the nature of the Beast! Surely I wouldst be a fool to believeth words that spilleth from thy serpentine tongue! A man of truth and honor be a bird so rare that mine doubts be grave that our paths couldst e'er cross. Heed my words, my Dear Lothario! Lie to me, and ye shall lie forever! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-17-2003 09:24 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
If he lies then he deserves an eternal lie.Strong writing here. Crystal |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"Lie to me, and ye shall lie forever!" Oh, My! Not an angel to take lightly... Nice, Linda! Ed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Crystal, I scared myself when I read what I had written! lol It was fun writing with such dark passion!  Sleep well, little angel! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Ed! Yeppers! There's more to this "angel" than just a shiny halo! lol Beware! Be true to me, or vengeance be mine!   Linda |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I chooseth not to lie, I mightst smite the trutheth. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is...amazing work. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL.... nicely done dear lady... remind me, would you, not to get on your bad side... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whoa....girlfriend...Im scared of you. LOL  love the language and vocab in this Linda... your dark side is quite poetic.  well done poetess Angel!! "If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
QjQ ~ Ye be a smart man with a high Eye Q! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kaoru ~ Thank you for the "amazing" comment! "Amazing" is "amazing"! lol EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
El Capitan! ~ I'd be most certain that if ye were to fall into my disfavour, ye wouldst know how to sweet talk thineself out of it! lol EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JM ~ I scared the dickens out of mine own self, as well! lol I suppose I was just letting my yang hang out!--and it felt ever so fine!  I'm flying by just the tips of my wings when I write the ways of the ancients! lol ~ must be coming from some past life recall! EA |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Hehehe, I just love all the wonderful voices and tones of you, sweet friend, I too have that ancient blood, but somehow I think it's all gone because I don't know how to talk like that! (shows innocent sad puppy face) This is wonderful, sweet friend, love all the wonderful sides of you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heed my words, my Dear Lothario! Lie to me, and ye shall lie forever! ~*~ As I might then share unto you, that I shall love you forever, and you, dear, dear Lothario, will always wonder if it t'were truth, or lie... ~*~ Goodness, Gertrude. You do smite a heavy pen! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
not coming to your castile thats for sure but maybe "she protesteth to much-methinks that beneath that veil of scorn lies a maid in need of my arms -to horse -faint heart never won etc " your etc arthur(rex) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ I am pleased that you appreciate the different "voices" and "tones" of my writing! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine ~ Nice storybook ending! Gertrude |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
King Arthur ~ Methinks ye may be right in thy assumptions, my lord! EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this my dear...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Linda, you could almost bring out another side of my poetry with these verses. Very powerful indeed, with such a flavor that I truly enjoy and savor. Fear not the dark of mine eyes, For I am not the beast of your dreams. Thy nights shall be filled with passions beyond thy senses, and thee shalt cry out in want of just one touch. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aloha, James! I'm glad I was able to put a little bit of joy in your evening! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry ~ I believeth a wee cry just escaped these ruby lips of mine... To Romance, Love & Passion, Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thine heart doth beat in earn'st m'lady. Tho this man doth sense thee flutter at mine words. Upon the courtyard, beyond the light of yon moon I wait. The scent of thy softness wafts smoothly with the zephyr and my eyes gleam in wait of thy call. Whisper m'lady and thy call shall be answered with great haste. See, ya got me going now..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magnus ~ With each word you whisper, this wanton heart beats faster--begging for release from the confines of mine chest. Flushed with the passion that courses through me, I seek to be sated. I call your name into the night--and I wait... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And she forgets to bring the bullhorn....not knowing that the old man is about half deaf and may not hear her call.....as he patiently stands in the courtyard scratching selective areas of his anatomy, straining an ear as hard as he can.....missing his one chance for fame glory and chivalry.... sheesh! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As the clouds part, moonlight pierces the dark of night and shines upon the man she had been searching for...longing for--the man of mystery whose glowing words of passion had captured her very soul. There, bathed in the light of the harvest moon, she beheld his uncouth acts. Aghast at his uncomliness, she turned to run. "Wait!" he cries out!... [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-17-2003 10:29 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If I can get off the floor, after falling out of my chair, stop laughing.....I might reply.... In your opinion.....are we both certifiably insane....or what? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Linda~ I loved this! Susan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ah, my lady, forgiveth mine iniquities. For the ants, the brutal ants consumed me as I waited beyond the light of yon moon. Fear not of my intentions, for I am most certainly not an uncouth braggard in search of a mere maid. My heart beats laboriously in wait of your return. Return M'lady, the night is young and your medicinal experience can help the fires that burn (from the ants) .... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, m'dear, it is far more fun being nuts in this crazy world than it is being sane! As they say, if you can't beat 'em, join 'em! This was fun! Thanks! EA P.S. I like being with the "In" group of sane people! lol You know, the ones that are insane! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-17-2003 10:57 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ Glad you did!--and thanks for saying so! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Linda, enjoyed as well...thanx for the joust...and glad to know we are both still somewhat (said reservedly) sane..... Barry |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my good man! I see ye managed to riseth from where ye fell in thy state of discomfiture. Once again ye beseech my comely presence to satisfy thy lustful dreams--claiming me as a vessel of thy passions. I will have none of it! Ye may have won mine heart with your mots, but mine flesh shall n'er be thine. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry ~ That part about the ants had me in stitches. You are such a versatile writer--from comedy to the macabre, from joy to sorrow, from romance to war, ... you are an amazing writer!!! Linda |
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