Open Poetry #28 |
She Wept Tears |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
And we wept tears under an orchid sky, Knowing that an end had approached nigh, Clutching to one another severely, 'Til neither of us could see quite clearly. Her tears were salty sweet upon my lips, I moaned in my need and pulled at her hips, And for a moment two hearts became one, But 'twas o'er as fast as it was begun. Still Time's rivulet has swept o'er the years, Whisking away all but remembered tears, And it's not the love-making I've recalled, But rather that for my leaving she bawled. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Aaaawwwww, Kevin, this is sweet, but sad. It does show what a tender heart you have, though. Some people could care less the effect their leaving has on someone. Thanks fore your great replies on my poems. I really appreciate it. Hugs Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good write,,,
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely written Kevin. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Kevin ( Shakespeare), I love this. :-) Hugs for a beautiful write and read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....Damn!! WOW! ~Hugs~
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Shakespeare I had to read this again. God your good. ;-) Hugs to you :-) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"And we wept tears under an orchid sky," Sometimes sad is so pretty |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
Aww, Kevin, you are a sweet soul, aren't you? Tender hearted, such gentle words flowing from your soul.. I love this. ~ becky |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful.. |
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