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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2003-09-17 11:12 AM


And we wept tears under an orchid sky,
Knowing that an end had approached nigh,
Clutching to one another severely,
'Til neither of us could see quite clearly.
Her tears were salty sweet upon my lips,
I moaned in my need and pulled at her hips,
And for a moment two hearts became one,
But 'twas o'er as fast as it was begun.
Still Time's rivulet has swept o'er the years,
Whisking away all but remembered tears,
And it's not the love-making I've recalled,
But rather that for my leaving she bawled.

© Copyright 2003 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-09-17 11:27 AM


Aaaawwwww, Kevin, this is sweet, but sad.
It does show what a tender heart you have, though.
Some people could care less the effect their
leaving has on someone.
Thanks fore your great replies on my poems.
I really appreciate it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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2 posted 2003-09-17 12:47 PM


good write,,,

                                

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3 posted 2003-09-17 01:15 PM


Very nicely written Kevin. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

froggy
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4 posted 2003-09-17 01:15 PM


Hey Kevin ( Shakespeare),

I love this.

:-)

Hugs for a beautiful write and read.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-09-17 01:18 PM


....Damn!!

WOW!
~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

froggy
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6 posted 2003-09-17 03:28 PM


Hey Shakespeare I had to read this again.
God your good. ;-)

Hugs to you

:-)

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7 posted 2003-09-17 03:41 PM



"And we wept tears under an orchid sky,"  Sometimes sad is so pretty

MorninGlory
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8 posted 2003-09-17 06:28 PM


Aww, Kevin, you are a sweet soul, aren't you? Tender hearted, such gentle words flowing from your soul.. I love this.

~ becky

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9 posted 2003-09-17 06:31 PM


Beautiful..
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