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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-16 08:44 PM



Tired Bits
~~*~~

your sound...loud and clear
belittling always near
what once I held dear

~~*~~

she says I give too much,
always have, even as a child
what can one do when offering
brings more pleasure than receiving

~~*~~

he rises the blush to my cheeks,
once a feeling to warm my heart
now just anger from his words meant to hurt

~~*~~

tired of pretending to smile
when all feels lost and
there is no one to share
its cost

~~*~~


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-16-2003 08:46 PM).]

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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-09-16 08:58 PM


For you, Maureen:  

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-09-17 05:20 PM



Well done, Maureen...
one can sense the futility...
and the struggle...

Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-09-17 05:27 PM


tired bits... I'm with Mark.. hugs from me as well..


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