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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-08-27 11:24 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#157

Copyright 2003 by:  Mark V Sheldon


counting
climbing
he harshly hammers
an early ending


eternity sleeps very soundly


after a good laugh


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-27 11:32 PM




(smiles) This truly "struck" to my heart, dearest friend, I wish I could strike such imagery and animation like this in brevity, as you truly are amazing at this! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-27 11:36 PM


Mark, You know you always wow me, wether happy or sad.You just keep getting better and better I wish I could bring an ounce of life to the page that you give.You my friend are a true inspiration to me
Crystal

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3 posted 2003-08-28 12:07 PM


****So much said with so few words...You brought a smile to my face.***

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2003-08-28 01:58 AM


Noah:  Don't worry about brevity -- you have a lot to say and you should use all the words you need.  With your vocabulary and keen awareness and compassion, we can all learn from you as well.  Just keep writing and sharing!

Wow, Crystal...  I am truly moved.  To know that my words may at times move another is gratification of the deepest kind, and to hear about it is very humbling.  Thank you -

Startime55:  I imagine it suits you well.  Thank you for taking a moment to read, reply, and .

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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5 posted 2003-09-17 10:52 AM


eternity sleeps very soundly


after a good laugh


(chuckling)....

yes it does..and there is much to laugh at..if one finds the humor

I am sure eternity has much to laugh about..

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2003-09-17 12:15 PM


I suppose its a self-preserving art unto itself -- to be able to find the humor in everything...  Either that, or a serious condition of denial...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-09-17 04:53 PM


I love how you think..wish I could do it in
less words..but when I was very young and growing up
and they had autograph books to sign...
someone signed in mine
"roses are red, their leaves are green
your mouth runs like a sewing machine..."
and the same goes for my thoughts


hugs
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-17-2003 04:53 PM).]

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2003-09-17 05:02 PM


That's pretty funny...  the lymeric, I mean.  Individuality is what makes this life interesting.  Stay true to it.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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9 posted 2003-09-17 05:04 PM


The master of 20 has graced us with yet another phenominal write. Great Job.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2003-09-17 05:15 PM


Wow, Ringo -- that's quite a title and compliment...  but thank you.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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