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Muted Pond ( It's going to be in the paper)
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Muted Pond ( It's going to be in the paper) |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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I entered in a contest and did not win, (BUT, I LOVE THAT WORD)It will be on the internet Thursday AM Sept.18th. If you would like go to toledocitypaper.com.Cool......  Love Bon-Bon Muted Pond The artist of all creation has touched this tiny meadow. His hand sweeping gently over His canvas- Creating beauty that no man can possibly attain. The pond a mirror of life in muted silhouettes and shadows is a masterpiece of artistry. An azure blue gray haze drifts silently, leaving touches of clear misty webs of lace across this silent meadow. The trees, their limbs splaying across the pond- Have the look of lacey silhouettes in their regal splendor as the sunset reflects their beauty on the quiet little pond. A deer feeding peacefully near the water is another reflection of the artist’s hand in His masterpiece of artistry. As the sunset begins its descent into the library of the universe. It reflects all its glorious beauty on this awe inspiring pond. The colors of navy, black, shades of brilliant crimson, the palest shades of rose and pink are being cast upon this hidden pond of beauty. Protecting this beautiful meadow are gigantic mountains. They are towering high into the vast expanse of the heavens and are reaching for the stars of the galaxy. They are a reflection of the entity who is the master ofall creativity, the master of all artistry. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The trees, their limbs splaying across the pond- Have the look of lacey silhouettes in their regal splendor as the sunset reflects their beauty on the quiet little pond. ******************************************** YES! I saw that scene clearly with your great imagery. Well done, poet! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
So colorful! Congratulations! Ssusan |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I was right there with you, and by his hands, you to have painted a lovely piece of paradise....lovely my friend...thank you for sharing. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
BonBon, this is so beautiful. Congratualtions on it being in the paper. I'm bumping it back so maybe more will see it.   Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is stunningly beautiful.Congrats on being in the paper.  Crystal |
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