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Open Poetry #28

The messenger

serametheicebound
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since 2003-09-04

Posts 8
South Africa-Free State

0 posted 2003-09-16 10:27 AM

Call me a messenger

When this eye becomes bound
With icy evidence so profound
This lip trembles with voices blazing
Like flames of kindles
This eardrum becomes avelanche and avelanches
Of enlightened trenches,sketches of wisdom blesses
And new avenues to anti-stenches
This verbal nuclear bomb bombards backyards
Of toxic branches
Then this spoken food digested from lexical intestine
Sprinkles spiritual,radical,metaphysical vomits
To gardens of Israel and Palestine
When this sharp fingernails
sharpened to cut like razor blades
Civil wars in this continent of mine

Hesitate not to call me a messenger
When I share my verses with millions of messes
Hesitate not to call me a messenger

When this tongue telegraphically
Telegraphs pragraphs to battlefields
To the arms of Lutanants,Generals and colonels
Then it reads please ceace these warfare
to fair this war shall bring no peace
When this sharp fingernails ruthlessly dig
Beneath America's Bush
For this bush conceals seeds of toxic fruits

Hesitate not to call me a messenger
When I share my verses with millions of messes
Hesitate not to call me a messenger

The Conquest Is My Daily Testament

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-09-16 10:44 AM

serametheicebound
Interesting write, enjoyed.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
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2 posted 2003-09-16 10:45 AM

Amen. This read like a "flow" to a rap (and I don't mean that as an insult, mind you), for I could feel a beat behind the words, both physical, and emotional.

-MVS

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-09-16 10:55 AM

I think it should be a rap,,,,very substantial and a profound write!!! Excellent,
if you cannot appeal to their minds, then appeal to their primordial senses, sooner or later they are bound to hear...and your speaking volumns.

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