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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Deep There are no words with awe so deep To bring my world for you to reap But lays a path within my goal Those coverts you in giving dole It is a spirits misty light The wonder of a starry night A breeze that passes through your hair The smell of roses in the air The weight that weights naivety A fantasy of ecstasy A wave that laps an oceans shoal A crave that stays within my soul A butterfly that flutters free The litany of mystery The crystal dew of morning’s light Where phantoms pass into the night It is the ghost that fills my sail It is the meaning of my Braille |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and in absence, it is a testament of the stunning human experience and importance of poetry, to our hearts and minds...hugs and good morning, what a stimulation you bring to the table, of language and imagery. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There are no words with awe so deep To bring my world for you to reap *** It is the meaning of my Braille ================= oh...me thinks your words do just fine, rhymes divine that transcend time ... and I will read them till me eyes go winkie blind.  *winkiwinkie*    |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A Deep, Deep Sigh for my pal, Sy... |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Very nice, relaxing and tranquil. Makes one feel better. Enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful serene write this late summer morn Sy! Just read the Balladeer's tribute to you and Isabel. You just renewed your vows! Does this mean I can't bring you tea anymore?  I can?!  Oooh good....cause it's poured! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ And...Congratulations on 61 years of wedded bliss!
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Good! A Sy Sigh to start my day! Dream on, Man! Write! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
..."There are no words"...? Then you come awfully close, Sy, and it's always a pleasure to glimpse into those depths. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you for the nice comp. JM, You are my Tinkerbell and one of the wells I sigh to drink. WWRS Nan You know I loveya, Hugs. mysticpoe, Thank you so much. Nancy, Of course, I'll be right over. Sunshine You still light my day, Hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, And it's always a pleasure to read your replies. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Deep the Sy of pen-in-flourish as the beauty of the night-in-nourish Deep the thought of poetic wander to another heart in earnest care~ *In my honest opinion (like I ever have any other kind)  You are the poet supreme A beacon of light sent forth in cadence of pleasant dream~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sorry I am late yet again Seymour! But, oh, what a lovely write this is. Just in time for afternoon tea and hot apple pie!! Yum Yum. hugs to you, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And you are a love beyond compare. Chris, Hugs and hot apple pie sounds great. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lyrical and full of beauty. Eric |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
As always, I enjoyed this beautiful write, just before I head off to sleep. Thank you, Sy...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Glad you liked the write. Sunnyone, Thank you for the sweet reply. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Your words immerse one to the deepest depths of the heart... To a well of passion, that is bottomless... Sensational write Seymour! Richy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Richy You bring a smile to my face, thank you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Nice penning,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ Thank you my friend. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful, Seymour. Sorry I'm so late reading it.  Hugs Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
She is a lucky woman indeed To recieve the love from your hearts seed To have it shine ever so bright And give her eternal beating life To have your words caress her heart A greater love shall never impart Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Never too late for me. Crystal, Thank you my dear. |
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