Open Poetry #28 |
When Love Seems Just Beyond Reach |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Webshots Photo ~~o~~ Sometimes there is love that seems just beyond reach for whatever reason It seems to come along at the wrong time or season At a time when circumstances just do not seem to cooperate A time when each of the people are involved with someone else or something else When neither wants to cause hurt or pain to someone ~So~ they cause pain to themselves ~~o~~ I should say that this poem doesn't concern me and Gary at all. It's written for a friend of mine. Repost [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-14-2003 08:29 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This hits the nail right on the head. Yes, many lives have been lived with one, yet wishing another. But they never can let go. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, I remember this..... and this time it's going into my library. You wrote with your entire heart here, and it truly shows. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, I wonder, though, if the one they are with doesn't feel some kind of void in their lives, too? Like there could be something more? I wonder. Thank you for liking it. . . Thanks Ed. I did know this at one time in my life......when I was married to my first husband......my daughter's Dad. It does hurt. You begin to feel trapped, somehow. I'm glad that you liked it enough to go into your library. . . I appreciate ya'll. Hugs to both of you, Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ethel, this spoke to me.For I've been there and made the same choice.It's hard to overcome but whichever way you choose, it can be done.If it's something shared between two who truly love each other it will conquer anything. Crystal P.S.I absolutely loved the picture. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is ever so common, and I have felt this ache too because Joanna never loved me in earnest and now I find myself longing for a true beautiful girl! (sigh) I am just happy that you have found the most wonderful love, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You have captured this painful predicament and its consequences so very well... excellent work! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (09-16-2003 08:43 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
ah m lady, you have just inspired a write, thankyou! this is a keeper. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I know this too much, your poem brings ache to me in heart, I want more, he wants less, I try too much with Love as great prize |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, I sure know how this feels. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I love it garysgirl :-) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Crystal. I'm glad that you like it. . Noah, thank you, my friend. I'm glad that you like it. . Thank you both. I appreciate ya'll. Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-17-2003 12:27 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Suthern, thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it. . Gemma, thank you keeping it. I'm glad that it gave you inspiration. . Lotus, sorry that you relate so much to this one. I know that it hurts. Thanks. . . I appreciate all of you Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I'm sorry that you can relate. I hope things get better for you. . Thanks, Froggy. I'm really glad that you like it. . . I appreciate you both. to you both Ethel |
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