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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-09-14 08:22 PM




Webshots Photo

~~o~~
Sometimes there is love
that seems just beyond reach
for whatever
reason

It seems to come along at
the wrong time
or season

At a time when circumstances
just do not seem to
cooperate

A time when each of the people
are involved with someone else
or something else

When neither wants to cause
hurt or pain to
someone

~So~
they cause pain to
themselves
~~o~~





I should say that this poem doesn't concern me and
Gary at all. It's written for a friend of mine.
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1 posted 2003-09-14 08:32 PM


This hits the nail right on the head.  Yes,
many lives have been lived with one,  yet
wishing another.  But they never can let go.

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2 posted 2003-09-14 08:33 PM


Ooh, I remember this..... and this time it's going into my library. You wrote with your entire heart here, and it truly shows.

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3 posted 2003-09-14 08:48 PM


Barry, I wonder, though, if the one they are with doesn't feel some kind of void in their lives, too? Like there could be something more? I wonder.
Thank you for liking it.
.
.
Thanks Ed. I did know this at one time in my life......when I was married to my first husband......my daughter's Dad. It does hurt. You begin to feel trapped, somehow. I'm glad that you liked it enough to go into your library.
.
.
I appreciate ya'll.
Hugs to both of you,  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-09-14 09:32 PM


Ethel, this spoke to me.For I've been there and made the same choice.It's hard to overcome but whichever way you choose, it can be done.If it's something shared between two who truly love each other it will conquer anything.
Crystal
    P.S.I absolutely loved the picture.

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5 posted 2003-09-15 04:43 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is ever so common, and I have felt this ache too because Joanna never loved me in earnest and now I find myself longing for a true beautiful girl! (sigh) I am just happy that you have found the most wonderful love, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-09-15 09:56 PM


You have captured this painful predicament and its  consequences so very well... excellent work! *S*

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7 posted 2003-09-16 05:57 PM


ah m lady, you have just inspired a write, thankyou!

this is a keeper.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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8 posted 2003-09-16 07:32 PM


I know this too much, your poem brings ache to me in heart,
I want more, he wants less, I try too much with Love as great prize

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9 posted 2003-09-16 07:58 PM


Ethel, I sure know how this feels.
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10 posted 2003-09-16 08:39 PM


I love it garysgirl

:-)

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11 posted 2003-09-17 12:27 PM


Thanks, Crystal. I'm glad that
you like it.  
.
Noah, thank you, my friend. I'm
glad that you like it.  
.
Thank you both. I appreciate ya'll.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-09-17 12:33 PM


Suthern, thank you very much. I'm
glad that you like it.  
.
Gemma, thank you keeping it. I'm glad
that it gave you inspiration.  
.
Lotus, sorry that you relate so much
to this one. I know that it hurts. Thanks.  
.
.
I appreciate all of you  
Hugs  
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-09-17 12:36 PM


Sue, I'm sorry that you can
relate. I hope things get better for you.  
.
Thanks, Froggy. I'm really glad
that you like it.  
.
.
I appreciate you both.
  to you both
Ethel

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