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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
Full of Empty . her heart is so full of empty no gentle words nor soft caresses to fill it . her arms are so full of empty no one to hold or wrap her arms around . her eyes cry cause she's so full of empty inside . Who will come fill her heart with gentle words and sweet caresses til its so full there is no room for empty anymore . who will come let her arms wrap around him or hold him so close that her arms are empty no more . who will dry the tears her eyes cry and who will help fill this void she has inside til its so full there is no room for empty . (written sept 14, 2003) Meesh |
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Sublime Truth Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 24New Denver, B.C., Canada |
Brought back memories of a time in my life, when I felt exactly how this poem reads. Your words read beautifly, and emotions presented clear and strong. If tiss a personal peice, your one-day will come, stay strong. If tiss not, and the period either never was or is over, then, simply thanks for the read. Either way, beautiful and so true to the topic given. Again, thanks very much for the read. - The Sublime |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KaleAnna~ I thought your title and the way you worked it was brilliant~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
sometimes we are all so full of empty, but what a beautiful and elegant way of putting it. the full of empty is sometimes what drives us. wonderful work. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem. I'm bumping it back to give others a chance to read it.   Hugs  Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is well written with great emotion. Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May there never be any room left for empty.  EA |
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heartpiper Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 57 |
Emotions are affectionately depicted here, Thanx for the read Iyad "Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers." |
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