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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-09-16 05:04 AM

Up on Makakilo Cliffs

In the daylight
I watch the ocean
kissing the Hawaiian shore.

In the distance
Diamond Head presents
its famous profile that
I have grown to adore.

On warm silky nights the lights
of Honolulu and Waikiki
come on to soothe
me once more.

JamesLee
September15
2003

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-09-16 05:09 AM

James...now you've got me wanting to go there.
Beautifully penned, sir poet.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-16 04:46 PM

James..this is one of the most beautiful pieces you have written!
You make me want to come visit!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2003-09-16 05:52 PM

I knew I shouldn't have read this . . .
making we wish, again, that I hadn't left.
Much to soothe, from the warm mists to the trades, to the . . . oh, I shouldn't be doing this to myself . . .

Kraw'

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-09-16 06:18 PM

JamesMichael~
The title was stand-alone poetry ...
the scenic view within ... beautemous~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-09-16 07:53 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I was there before, sweet friend, before Passions was born and you became a dear friend of mine here, I went on vacation with my family to Oahu six years ago and Makakilo Cliffs and Chinaman's Hat are the two places that stick out in my memory most of all on that beautiful island! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is one of your best ever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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