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Open Poetry #28
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kauai
Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 12
0 posted 2003-09-16 03:40 AM

the sadness is great
pour out water oh heavens
flood this heart of mine

"This is the ish, yall ain't ready for"
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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-09-16 04:00 AM


And the sky opened
In release of a downpour
Refreshing my soul


Nicely done, Kauai.

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-09-16 05:06 AM

Nice writing...sometimes heaven does seem far away...James
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