Who Is This Fine Fair Maiden?

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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-09-15 07:55 PM

Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

Who is this fine fair maiden
With the flowers in her hair
She seems to be so lonely
Standing quietly over there

She waits for her prince charming
To sweep her off her feet
The atmosphere is electric
Every time their two hearts meet

The whispers in the wind
Carry love's familiar call
Whenever she is in his presence
Time has no meaning at all

He arrives and stands before her
And as their fingers interlace
She hears the words 'I love you'
As he bends to kiss her face

His voice is but a whisper
As he leans towards her ear
All her senses are fulfilled
Her love for him is crystal clear

* * *

".......you have bereft me of words,
only my blood speaks to you
through my veins."

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-09-15 08:39 PM

SueTang~
Good Heaven's above woman ... this is GORGEOUS !!!

You are outdoing yourself~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-09-15 09:16 PM

Sue, that is so beautiful and I love the picture. Nice to see your *smiling* words
hugs
M

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-09-15 09:46 PM

Sue: Wonderfully romantic and with an"old world" quality that is endearing.

Betty Lou Hebert

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-15 10:20 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I dream so much of making my dream girl feel special and being her prince charming! (kiss on cheek) (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooo romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-15 10:41 PM

Well, as you can imagine, I love this poem! The tenderness just flows down the page, like warm honey on a summer day. Such sweet love we all would love to taste. Wonderful write.

~ becky

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-09-16 05:15 AM

Nice writing..title is delicious...James

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2003-09-16 05:23 AM

"His voice is but a whisper
As he leans towards her ear
All her senses are fulfilled
Her love for him is crystal clear"

This is truly beautiful, Sue...
and one of my favorites of yours.
Wonderfully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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