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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-09-09 03:05 PM

In this moment...

at the stillness of dawn
before awakening
of early birds
and sacrificial
worms...

In this moment...

when all is silent
save the hollow beating
of one heart
and the whisper
of 'still alone'
upon lips...

In this moment...

as the dream
surrenders to 'real'
and shadowy fingers
caress the center
of morning...

In this moment...

a spirit breaks
in endless wait
of a love
not meant
to be...

In this moment

~vlraynes

"Here I am with pockets full of good intentions
But none of them will comfort me tonight..."
~Carpenters

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-09-09 03:14 PM

Vicky~
This is as tender a render as I'll read this day~
Huglets
~*Me

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-09-09 03:22 PM

Vicky~ Loved this!!

Susan

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-09 03:25 PM

This is tender and smooth.Loved the flow.

Crystal

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-09 03:42 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Every morning I know this yearning, dearest friend, then I only remind myself that waiting is the hardest part of life and the most comforting part to life is knowing someone is waiting for you! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully tranquil, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!'

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-09-09 03:45 PM

Shhhh...
I'm listening...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-09-09 08:15 PM

Vicky...Beautiful, though a bit sad.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-09-09 08:34 PM

very nice penning vicky,,,

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2003-09-09 09:08 PM

'Tis a sacred moment for sure...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-09-09 09:09 PM

nice(hugs)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2003-09-09 09:10 PM

Oh Vicky, this is a wonderful write. Enjoyed it muchly. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2003-09-09 09:34 PM

This is so beautifully written, Vicky. As always.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-09-10 01:57 AM

Very, very beautiful, Vicky. Thanks
for sharing this with us.

Hugs

Ethel

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-09-10 04:54 AM

Ohh I do know the sound of that gentle beating . . .
but?
moments are fleeting . . .
*smile*
Beautiful writing Vicky
xxoo

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

14 posted 2003-09-10 09:31 AM

very much enjoying your writings

especially love this verse:

"as the dream
surrenders to 'real'
and shadowy fingers
caress the center
of morning..."

hugs, g

"They say that Anger is just Love disappointed..." Eagles

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

15 posted 2003-09-10 10:22 AM

Doggone it! You do this well

A beauty
Ed

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

16 posted 2003-09-11 01:29 AM

*sigh* Big

this tugged at my heartstrings Mum

again. I hope you're ok

There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective
Happy Trails To You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2003-09-16 05:37 AM

I know these moments...James

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