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Open Poetry #28

Falling supple smooth around your feet

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-15 02:53 PM

Bite into me
and my
resistance

Clenched teeth
a couple of pounds
extra flesh
upon my hips

You know
little of
woman

No more than
sweet taste
and sickly smiles

I am
whole
fruit

Falling supple
smooth
around your feet

However many times
you bite
strip away
layers of myself

I will
always
grow back
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-15 03:00 PM

hmmm... biting and hips...
you're eitehr very inviting or..your telling us all to bite you.
LOL

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2003-09-15 03:08 PM

Somewhere
there
beneath a
layer
lays
the ways
that amaze
and daze

Fruit for thought but, mind ... do naught.

I, for one, would be a rainbow chaser.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2003-09-15 03:26 PM

a bit eerie.

and is that a promise or a threat there at the end hahaha

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-15 03:26 PM

Gem, your best or at least my favourite thusfar

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2003-09-15 03:37 PM

You wrap your fists in velvet
for this one.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-09-15 04:12 PM

Ackkkk, four of my fave chaps, and virginia, thankyou.

yes, i do bite.
yes i suppose i am telling a certain someone to "bite me" though its a phrase i never use, it's used more in america methinks, it reminds me of a scene in a film, but i cant remmeeeeember what its called.
yes, i am inviting
yes, i have big hips

yes, both a promise and a threat.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-09-15 05:06 PM

I am
whole
fruit

Falling supple
smooth
around your feet

that dear one.... is as inviting an image as I have heard to convey both sensual and at the same time strength....

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

8 posted 2003-09-15 05:30 PM

scratches head...are ya a woman or a banana? lol...sometimes I can't tell...

ugh..wooo..and what am i? choped liver?

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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