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Open Poetry #28

Always

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-09-14 09:21 PM

the sun will burn you
but i'll always be there
you may be half dead
but i'll always be there
i was made for you
and i'll always be there
i wont suffocate you
i wont hurt you
your heart isnt the only one on the line.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-14 09:25 PM

I like the heart shown in this.To know that you have someone who was made for you and will always be there.Must be a wonderful thing eh....Nicely penned.

Crystal

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-15 12:42 PM

This is so sad, because it seems the other one doesnt know the other one feels that... :'( Moved by this one.
Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-09-15 05:18 PM

I like this assurance very much... and its ending reminder. *S* Well done! *S*

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-09-15 05:27 PM

this is awsome chelsea

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
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