Open Poetry #28 |
Merchant of Time |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Time, that merchant of wares, ever present. Selling seconds to souls, selling infinity to death, bartering moments away as casually as a breeze across a clover laden field. This scoundrel that wages war on me daily, who has taken away the foliage from the tree, who bends the limbs of my youth and waters the lilies waiting for my stone. Whispering I, to this rascal of dark and untrusting eyes, with a smile that would enchant the world. Asking him the one question, an unknown we all share... When....when? Silence, more quietening than the mortician’s humble abode. Deafening to some, those whose ears ring from the lack of words as a heart beats more vigorously in wait of an answer. “When the raven flies east, the sun sets west and the rooster crows upon the morn.” Befuddled, walking away empty handed, pondering the words. When? Knowing not the answer for... Only time knows. [This message has been edited by Magnus (09-14-2003 04:23 PM).] |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
who bends the limbs of my youth and waters the lilies waiting for my stone. Another word picture! However the entire write was in picture form! Loved it! Subtle whimsy too! Ask not, "When," Ask instead, "What time is it?" Then seize the moment! It's all yours! Who cares "when"? 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you JilGirl....yes, sieze the moment. Pleased you enjoyed... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Barry, I wrote a poem about "Time" yesterday. Of course, it would never be as good as yours. Your writing is so beautifl, Barry. Hugs Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I always try to find something to critique. I always fail. Thank you Magnus. A pure pleasure to read... |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
live life to the fullest while you can...there will be no answers while in this state, I think. ecrivan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is so true.We must seize each day like there is no tomorrow and live happily.I loved that this was a picture write. Crystal |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Always love your style, Barry -- a kind of "poetic zephyr", if you will... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
When the Owl calls your name... Thank you for sharing this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ You are a man of immeasurable talent~ This just burns itself into my ponder~ Contemplative penning at it's finest, sir~ Thank you for being a poet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a ponderance recalls the edge of the chasm...spending too much time only tempts the faint foot. Always impressive Mr. Magnus... TD |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The truth rests upon the raven wings, for the sun goes west and the rooster always sings Long time since my last glimpse of your word .... still astounding, as always. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, you are one fine Poe-et! Linda P.S. I'm too much of a scaredy cat to know! I'd rather be surprised! lol |
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