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LukeatNFFC
Junior Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 42
Nottingham, England

0 posted 2003-09-01 11:34 AM

Reposting in the hope it wont be ignored this time.....:

Just a load of gobbledegook I concocted about God, aka. The Miracle Maker. Don't ask me why I put this trash on here, I'm just bored, I suppose..................

Mightiness and power,
Beauty of a flower,
In the darkness he could cower,
Behind the summer sun.

While the world below was happy,
He would stay back,
Thinking of normality,
Something he must lack.

The death and the destructions,
He would make,
Bringing no repercussions,
He could not take.

If there was a miracle,
He was not invisible,
He could stay, And watch them all,
The miracles he made.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-09-01 11:44 AM

I didn't see it the first time around, and I'm not familiar with any of your other posts.
Sometimes people don't reply because they aren't sure what to say. This is the case with me on this post. I'll come back again later and re-read it. Perhaps it's too early in the day for me to figure this one out, as I work nights.
Later. BTW, welcome to Pips.

NewAgePaladin
Junior Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 11
New Jersey

2 posted 2003-09-01 12:18 PM

quote:
Mightiness and power,
Beauty of a flower,
In the darkness he could cower,
Behind the summer sun.

Now thats my kinda Poetry. I look forward to reading more.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-02 01:03 PM

Luke:

dont despair, the boards get crazy but this:

Mightiness and power,
Beauty of a flower,
In the darkness he could cower,
Behind the summer sun.

a perfect stanza
Welcome and please keep posting
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-09-14 09:48 PM

Luke, you are a very good writer.
Thanks for sharing your viewpoint.
Thanks,
Ethel

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-09-14 10:34 PM

HI Luke...

I'm just not sure I understand it all, but I know *He* won't be the one to create the upheaval...our sin *nature* as man does that. We are born in to sin, but as we get old enough we are respondsible to change that by going to Him for His love, and fellowship, and praying for his grace to save us from that nature within. I doubted God not long ago so while it may seem I have no right to say anything.. I don't agree..*HE* showed me all the more how much His love is superior, and He can love when we as humans can't. He doesn't create the chaos...we do. He is there to help *IF* we ask. I hope you didn't mind what I had to say...it's what I got from this write in the sense that you said:

The death and the destructions,
He would make,
Bringing no repercussions,
He could not take.

Repercussions are from our own choices, and the consequence they bring.

Love,
SharaRose @-->--

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