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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2003-09-13 02:16 PM





White candles glowing gold
spin their precious sleep
into a golden orchestra
of misty light. Two souls
guided out of the dark clouds
into the serene, clouds of day.
United by Fate...Destiny
unfolding its crinkled corners.
A path sought straight to
the heart. A fine line crossed,
drawn into Love's flaming
pyre. Hearts calling...
"Arise, O, Sleepers. Awaken
to the possibilities. Then, Love's
fireworks may burst upon your skies."

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (09-13-2003 03:06 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-09-13 02:34 PM


Very beautiful!
Love's fireworks may burst upon your skies
Love, Margherita

MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30
Posts 175
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-09-13 02:38 PM


Very nice! I like this - beautiful sentiment.

~ becky

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