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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-09-09 11:11 PM


“IN MYSTERIES SHADOW”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Little things would I do to
you, perhaps a kiss in
the rain,
sharing your photo picture
with myself in the
silence of the
night framed by moonbeams…

I’d share of romance in the
midst of gentle raindrops,
touch you in tender
places so your spine would
know of chills
in between the ones before…

So look for me, search me in
tenderness
for there will I be,
and you will then know me
of passions taste,
whether in summer fair,
or of in mysteries shadow…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-09 11:13 PM


very beautiful,, sir poet

                

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-09 11:18 PM


This is pretty. So pretty the images are that come to mind. Lovely!


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-09-09 11:23 PM


This is so wonderfully romantic.I'm on my way to look for you....hehehhehe
Crystal

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-09-10 10:34 PM


very smooth with a hint of moon
Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-09-10 10:37 PM


Softly sensual Bill...Much enjoyed this one!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-09-10 11:34 PM


Bill, what an utterly private moment
soo much said right here:

sharing your photo picture
with myself in the
silence of the
night framed by moonbeams…

bittersweet . . .
xxoo

MorninGlory
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7 posted 2003-09-10 11:46 PM


Bill, this is so sensitive, touching, tender. Its quite lovely.

~ becky

Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2003-09-11 12:23 PM


Bill...This is one of your most tender and endearing poems. It really touches the chords of my heart. Truly beautiful and truly a beautiful example of romantic writing. ***Ivy Rose
LeeJ
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9 posted 2003-09-11 09:02 AM


lovely and most sensual thoughts to the mind...a comfort given and cherished, by two who are in love....oh love how completely profound....such a beautiful write
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10 posted 2003-09-11 09:20 AM


BillCharles~

'a kiss in
the rain'


You flourish with a tender pen, kind poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

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11 posted 2003-09-11 09:40 AM


nice write
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12 posted 2003-09-11 10:51 AM


The mystery of shadows....wonderful images through this....hugsssss BC
Lauren~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-09-11 10:54 AM


BC ~

I got all tingly reading this titillating poem.

I am heading out right now to look for "tenderness" for that is where I'll find you!


EA

Sunnyone
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14 posted 2003-09-11 12:17 PM


Ah, BC....now this is one of my favorites from your talented pen and heart!  Excellent, all the way through...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-09-11 12:46 PM


Bill,
You old romantic you, enjoyed.

Martie
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16 posted 2003-09-11 12:59 PM


Bill...Very tenderly written, with a vulnerable touch that is so appealing.  
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17 posted 2003-09-11 05:03 PM


"I’d share of romance in the
midst of gentle raindrops,
touch you in tender
places so your spine would
know of chills
in between the ones before…"




(smiles) Oh Bill, I love the whole poem, though this verse touched me in particular as it truly shows the miracle of romance and how it truly comforts the heart forever! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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18 posted 2003-09-12 12:45 PM


sharing your photo picture
with myself in the
silence of the
night framed by moonbeams…

You've been peeking! *S* For this I do... yes. *S*

Beautiful and romantic... I like this very much! *S*

garysgirl
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19 posted 2003-09-12 01:28 PM


So look for me, search me in
tenderness
for there will I be,
and you will then know me
of passions taste,
whether in summer fair,
or of in mysteries shadow…


Bill, that special someone is going to
find you one day.
Hugs  
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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20 posted 2003-09-12 01:31 PM


Different recipe Bill...
Just as romantic, but something new, and intriguing. Very cool. TD

JilGirl
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21 posted 2003-09-12 02:06 PM


A mighty fine romantic write!
Sweet and tender!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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22 posted 2003-09-12 03:50 PM


Hi BC ... I gotta go find me some of that 'tenderness.'

Another great romantic saga from the King of Romance.

Hugs, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

Margherita
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23 posted 2003-09-13 01:26 PM


Those little things suggested by the great longing!
She must KNOW and hurry to make your wishes come true.
Beautiful and tender.
Love, Margherita

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