Open Poetry #28 |
In Mysteries Shadow |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“IN MYSTERIES SHADOW” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Little things would I do to you, perhaps a kiss in the rain, sharing your photo picture with myself in the silence of the night framed by moonbeams… I’d share of romance in the midst of gentle raindrops, touch you in tender places so your spine would know of chills in between the ones before… So look for me, search me in tenderness for there will I be, and you will then know me of passions taste, whether in summer fair, or of in mysteries shadow… ~~~~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very beautiful,, sir poet
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is pretty. So pretty the images are that come to mind. Lovely! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is so wonderfully romantic.I'm on my way to look for you....hehehhehe Crystal |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very smooth with a hint of moon |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly sensual Bill...Much enjoyed this one! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill, what an utterly private moment soo much said right here: sharing your photo picture with myself in the silence of the night framed by moonbeams… bittersweet . . . xxoo |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
Bill, this is so sensitive, touching, tender. Its quite lovely. ~ becky |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is one of your most tender and endearing poems. It really touches the chords of my heart. Truly beautiful and truly a beautiful example of romantic writing. ***Ivy Rose |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely and most sensual thoughts to the mind...a comfort given and cherished, by two who are in love....oh love how completely profound....such a beautiful write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ 'a kiss in the rain' You flourish with a tender pen, kind poet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
The mystery of shadows....wonderful images through this....hugsssss BC Lauren~ The way you move me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ I got all tingly reading this titillating poem. I am heading out right now to look for "tenderness" for that is where I'll find you! EA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, BC....now this is one of my favorites from your talented pen and heart! Excellent, all the way through...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, You old romantic you, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...Very tenderly written, with a vulnerable touch that is so appealing. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I’d share of romance in the midst of gentle raindrops, touch you in tender places so your spine would know of chills in between the ones before…" (smiles) Oh Bill, I love the whole poem, though this verse touched me in particular as it truly shows the miracle of romance and how it truly comforts the heart forever! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
sharing your photo picture with myself in the silence of the night framed by moonbeams… You've been peeking! *S* For this I do... yes. *S* Beautiful and romantic... I like this very much! *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So look for me, search me in tenderness for there will I be, and you will then know me of passions taste, whether in summer fair, or of in mysteries shadow… Bill, that special someone is going to find you one day. Hugs Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Different recipe Bill... Just as romantic, but something new, and intriguing. Very cool. TD |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
A mighty fine romantic write! Sweet and tender! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi BC ... I gotta go find me some of that 'tenderness.' Another great romantic saga from the King of Romance. Hugs, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Those little things suggested by the great longing! She must KNOW and hurry to make your wishes come true. Beautiful and tender. Love, Margherita |
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