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Whispered Promises |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
~ In your eyes, I can feel the way you see me when you touch me. In your arms, I can hear the way your heart beats when we kiss. In my mind, I can touch that part of you that makes me shiver, and on your lips, warm promises. I breathe in, always wanting to believe the things you tell me. You begin, telling me that there’s no other in your eyes. Days go by, this feeling starts to grow down deep inside me. I have feelings I cannot hide. Lying here, I sometimes wonder why you care about me. I close my eyes, a million thoughts go flying through my mind. In my dreams, you're wrapped around me telling me you love me. When I awake, I’m swallowed by your eyes. Come to me, let me hold you close and smother you with kisses. See my eyes, can you tell how they rejoice in your sweet smile. Breathe me in, when we make love in the early mornin’ shadows, as we come together, promises are met. ~ . ~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love this line "When I awake, I’m swallowed by your eyes." It's at good as breathing you in. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Believe what you feel and see in his eyes. Beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
MorninGlory...Very beautiful and romantic poem. It certainly spoke to my heart with its wonderful poetic expression. ***Ivy Rose |
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