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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-09-13 08:15 AM


Turn Around

The acid
Of my
Day
Melted
The footsteps
Of
My way

And though
I tried
To turn
Around
The road
Was gone
Could not be found

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-09-13 08:22 AM


All righty then - What a wonderful deviation from your normal great stuff!!... I love this message, sweet Sy..
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-09-13 08:26 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

It's seems that you had a good work out today ~ stretching those poetic wings of yours.

Were you having another nightmare, my pet?
Well, I have the perfect potion for you! I'll see you at moon rise! The celestial orb, that is! lol


EA

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3 posted 2003-09-13 08:30 AM


Morning Seymour.  
This is different, but good....
very good!! Thanks, my friend.  
Hugs to you  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-09-13 08:45 AM


Ethel,
Nobody is perfect. LOL

Earth Angel,
You mean you found the yellow brick road? LOL

Nan,
I'll take any road you will.

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-09-13 09:09 AM


Absolutely stunning, dear Seymour! Great thought. I welcome your free verses, they go straight to the heart. It's good sometimes to allow ourselves to express our feelings in a different way.
Highly appreciated!
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-09-13 09:16 AM


Margherita
Thank you dear,

scorpio
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7 posted 2003-09-13 09:33 AM


A different approach this morning, Sy...well done..

believe in what your heart feels...

MorninGlory
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8 posted 2003-09-13 09:35 AM


No second chances, eh? Like footsteps disappearing as soon as they are left, evaporating - nicely done. So much variety out here, I'm truly amazed.

~ becky

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9 posted 2003-09-13 09:39 AM


I had to do that on the last heavy rains we had...couldn't find the road to home...

probably a different meaning but we are having heavy rains at the moment.


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10 posted 2003-09-13 10:01 AM


Good morning Seymour! Sorry that I haven't been round with snacks lately. No...not the puppy this time....tendonitis flaring up...OUCH. Anyway, interesting read this Saturday of sun,,,,so here's a blueberry muffin to make it even more fun! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

Sunshine
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11 posted 2003-09-13 10:01 AM



Sy!  
Free Verse,
for me????




Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-09-13 10:25 AM


scorpio
Thank you for the well done.

MorninGlory
Wecome and thank you for the read.

Maureen,
It works either way. LOL


Chris,
I missed you,

Sunshine,
Free verse, do I need a nurse? LOL

Ericc
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13 posted 2003-09-13 10:29 AM


Powerfuly expressed.
Eric

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-09-13 10:32 AM


Ericc
Thank you for the nice comment.

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15 posted 2003-09-14 02:28 PM


I've definitely had days like this. *S*

Beautiful work, my friend... I like!*S*

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-09-14 02:40 PM


suthern
I didn't think I was alone.

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17 posted 2003-09-15 02:32 AM


Sounds like you were following me around last Friday.......acid, nice image for it!

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18 posted 2003-09-15 02:34 AM


Sounds like you were following me around last Friday.......acid, nice image for it!

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Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2003-09-15 07:24 AM


Ratleader
Thanks for the doubble boost. LOL

LeeJ
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20 posted 2003-09-15 08:07 AM


hiya kid, how r u?

Well, we may have the same problem here on Thurs cause Isabelle is on her way, Gulp

Smiles, and hugs

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-09-15 08:29 AM


LeeJ
Double Isabel can not be tolerated, LOL
Thank you for the read.

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