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bbent
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0 posted 2003-09-13 01:55 AM



Gifts of a simple singer
more than one way to pluck a turkey.


Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...


[This message has been edited by bbent (09-13-2003 02:58 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-13 01:57 AM


music is very powerful...the singer is never simple to the listener

good write

bbent
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2 posted 2003-09-13 02:47 AM


Thanks shadow but just realized i deleted some lines so it reads quite odd...so hopfully it's off for now with the right version later...thanks for taking the time to read and reply anyway if you should see this...lol
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3 posted 2003-09-13 02:59 PM


LOL, so true
plucking more 'gut strings' than you know
with each note

smiling, at your thoughts today



hey Ray, didn't you really mean
simple gifts, of a singer?
or perhaps, just simply, 'gifts' of a singer

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-13-2003 03:13 PM).]

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4 posted 2003-09-13 07:37 PM




(sigh) Oh Ray, this is so very true, sweet friend, I am constantly developing my vocals in my music so I can become a great songwriter and have the ability to make the audience cry, smile, and hug teir loved ones with my ranged singing! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, poetry too has vocals and you range them so well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ray, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

bbent
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5 posted 2003-09-14 12:36 PM


Thanks Kacy...the poem was another Johnny Cash tribute that I tried having deleted to no avail so the turkey pluckin was just an alternate choice to the delete...hillbillies and classical musicians pluck and saw on cat gut not turkey,I understand living in the Ozarks is a risky proposition for the feline species...If some kind mod should run across and actually delete this post for me I'll repost the proper one...
Thanks Noah...used to be a weather man on the tube here with the same name as you...your a very unique individual and I'm sure any music you produce will shine for it.
Thank you both for replyng and I'll work on the grammer(lol).

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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