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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2003-09-14 11:01 AM




Walk with me
Share my path
I know it’s a bit crowded
But it’s all the hats I wear
All a part of me

Walk with me
Share my dreams
I know they may seem silly
But they fill me full of zeal
All a part of me

Walk with me
Share my love
I know my life is busy
And I wouldn’t change a thing
For it’s all a part of me



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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-09-14 12:27 PM


WOW I like...lays it on the line...all the cards on the table, and makes things clear. Some of us out here LOVE clear! No guesswork sounds VERY nice.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-09-14 12:35 PM


very few can say they would not change a thing...good attitude
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