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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I knew at that moment that I heard your voice, I would falter once again |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh...how I can relate to this! Well done, Jason.  Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There is an instant when you just know....when something in you says "Yes," no matter what you thought the words were going to be....been there, did that. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ain't it just like that sometimes? sigh |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
faltering is under-rated  Jason, loved this one, m'friend, so I think I'll keep it. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, sometimes we just can't help it, can we? Some people just do that to us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sure! Voices alone can change our destiny! Perfect senryu. Love, Margherita |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
that's the thing about temptation -- it's so ...tempting! well penned Jas |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason: self control is sooooo over rated *smile* xxoo |
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