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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
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Somewhere

0 posted 2003-09-13 01:20 PM


Why do I look upon my appearence
As another reason to doubt my life
Who cares if I look like this
Do I have to look like that

To listen to this music
To wear these clothes
To pick these hobbies
To contradict or agree
Or to even merely think about these

So introspection will soon reveal
Like to me it revealed much
I don't care about the physical
Of myself or anyone else

If I could transcend my own body
Would I choose to or not
The question is quite hard to choose
But the benefits are sellouts would be bereft

Just live up to what you want
And don't sell out to yourself
Uniquely picking your ambitions
Is a base core of life

[This message has been edited by symphony_of_thoughts (09-13-2003 01:22 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-09-13 01:40 PM


To live up to what we want is a great goal!
Beyond appearances, lies truth.
It is all right not to be influenced by all the trends, this does not exclude to care lovingly for our physical selves.
Thank you for your beautiful message. Nature knows best what beauty is all about!
Love, Margherita  

[This message has been edited by Margherita (09-13-2003 01:46 PM).]

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-09-13 02:56 PM


just BE...
who or what
YOU wish to Be,
don't be concerned with
the view from me,

remember
even that personal self-image,
personal goals,
change with
time, experience,
the bumps and bruises
as well as all the
seconds filled with
love and life

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