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Open Poetry #28

The Air Delicious

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-09-12 01:20 PM

~*~~*~

A lift into the
Sparkling blue
On summer breeze
Just passing through

The marker as
The autumn glows
Successful picks
A tease of knows

Where warm bread sits
The sill in view
Of springs new blossoms
Apples cue

Brown Betty scents
By hands delight
Appeal the feel
Of sweet just right

Copyright Kkh 9/12/03

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-12 01:24 PM

Oh Kathleen...
The scent of Brown Betty sure brought back memories..
The sky is a vivid blue today and the air so clear..
Beautiful write..much enjoyed...
Waving a hand from across the border!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-09-12 01:25 PM

FEDEX??

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

3 posted 2003-09-12 01:58 PM

This gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling. Made me want to cozy up at home!

I honestly really needed a poem like this right now. Thank you.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-09-12 02:08 PM

Yummy poetry, d'ahling.

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

5 posted 2003-09-12 02:14 PM

"Sweet, just right"
this write is too!
Deliciously expressed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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