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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-09-12 08:49 AM



Come The Morning

"...and come the morning"
she says to herself
"there will be music
to stay my dreams,
freshened air
to soften my breaths,
and beauty,
knowing my eyes
are seeing more
than the blue
once again..."

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-09-12 09:04 AM


Golly, what a nice one to wake up to....

....poem, that is.....

The sun isn't up yet here in La-La Land, but the day just got a little brighter.

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2 posted 2003-09-12 09:05 AM


knowing my eyes
are seeing more
than the blue
once again..."


may they see rainbows my friend..

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-09-12 09:13 AM


Good morning Ed, the sun is up and the clouds are moving in...awaiting Isabel's
push...but I have been giving myself a pep talk lately...and I think it may be working.


Ron, I was thinking..there may be a rainbow today...but even if not, today I will be thinking as if there is...thanks

(p.s. I attempted your challenge, not sure I succeeded)

M

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4 posted 2003-09-12 09:13 AM


very nicely penned,,,

                   

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-09-12 09:19 AM


Thank you
I always wanted to try that

M

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