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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-09-10 03:09 PM



I am vigorous in style
I sit here with a smile
nervously waiting the news

Tap tap with the tip of my shoes
not scared or feeling blue
almost excitable this is true

High strung like a cat on crack
jittery and wired since the break of dawn
wondering if I am doing something wrong

My eye starts to twitch
oh life is just too rich
see how slow the clock clicks

Distress is the obvious
but what lies underneath
that has caused such a stir

Does any one know?
please if you can guess
give it your best

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-09-10 03:13 PM


Waiting to see if you got that promotion?
Ummm....results of a pregnancy test?
I give up....what is it?
Cute write though...
~Hugs~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-09-10 03:14 PM


My eye starts to twitch
oh life is just too rich
see how slow the clock clicks

The good news is, it's Wednesday already!

  Liked this a lot!!!


Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2003-09-11 10:49 AM


LOL
Nancy got it quick
Promotion was the guess
LOL good job!

Oh yes it is Wednesday
and my nerves have turned into cardboard
some what stronger yet not were they need to be LOL

KristieSue
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4 posted 2003-09-11 11:35 AM


GOOOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and nice job!

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

Janette
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Chicagoland for now
5 posted 2003-09-11 10:58 PM


Good Luck!

and please let us know the outcome!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-09-11 11:16 PM


Your sense of anticipation comes pouring out of this write! Now you have me tapping my toe and wringing my hands and ...

Good luck with the promotion!


EA

Thomas119gold
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
7 posted 2003-09-12 09:26 AM


LOL Thank you all
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