Open Poetry #28 |
My Wings to Awaken |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I was shivering expressions of distress Staring out French doors through a garden elegant A gentleman poet you were, without paper and pen Embarking from a stairway, I was afraid to climb Which spiraled carnations, into a dream-like state Shocking tenderness from some magnetic domain Your golden soprano voiced, the evening just fine Enough to balance a perfect scale, pulsing a voltage rhyme Swirling camaraderie and suckling hope from your eyes The infer-red glow of your flesh infusing music of daylight Your fingers diagramed a collection of foresight Extending your strong and trusting mind to heart The sheath of life and wonders always found Right there upon your lips, eternally charged To each our ideas the quiet sings profoundly enlarged Where you agree and give me what I embrace You’re like visiting an old friend, joy unlaced Fire of feelings exploding from your arms Sparkling eyes lifting the fog, reaching in swarms Informing our imaginations to keep on dreaming Basking within the pleasures of what we are, and yet to be Interpretations purposely reflective and savored You’re aromatic essence, sensual and layered Forming experience in open-eyed verse A dream wherein we both immerse Our mysterious image of what is Where life ultimately affirms our reach You throw flowers at my feet, A rocket goes off In places I’ve yet to know and touch |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous penning n read,, lady poetess
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... your imagery and the feelings very alive in this... I enjoyed |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You reach the tops.. you stay at the top.. beautifully written, I love your poetry to no end. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
shew! had to stop and take a breath! very hot and passionate woman! really got me awake this morning! heartpounding! ~ARH |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow! You immerse beautifully in your dream! Love, Margherita |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Lee, this is terrific! You wove every line into this write of romance and passion! One favorite: ~0~ Fire of feelings exploding from your arms Sparkling eyes lifting the fog, reaching in swarms Informing our imaginations to keep on dreaming ~0~ But, then I enjoyed all of it! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Many thanks sent to you all for reading and commenting on my poem, I greatly appreciate your interests in my work and time and I'm smiling b/c Romantic Hearts comment....many who read my poetry think the same sometimes. I like to think of my writings as more of a spiritual enlightening rather then the physical...it is something felt deep within....for instance....the following lines which read as such, depicts a person who I've met who thinks and feels as I do, very passionate about nature, his spiritual beliefs in God, a great care for others, his country, and enjoys the same interests, which to me is very important for a relationship to work....compatibility. To each our ideas the quiet sings profoundly enlarged Where you agree and give me what I embrace I hope my work does not come across as errotically charged with a physical intimacy as much as an intimacy with the spiritual....God, insight, awareness, a passion for life, nature, the ocean....a glow from the happiness of others....and a desire to make just a little bit better this place we live in....now, that man will most definately catch my eye and turn my head...and would be well worth his amount in Gold. smiles and hugs, and thank you always for reading, sharing and also the compliments of your work/poems as well. I wish I could read and comment on all of your poems, but circumstances has prevented me from that for the time being...right now I cannot, and I'm so sorry for that...forgive me if you will... In the meantime I will continue to post and read your work and comment when I can...but please don't be hurt if I cannot.... My best to you and to this web site as it is filled with some very talented and caring people....your all very kind, artistic and giving. Thank you Have a wonderful Friday and a great weekend..and for those of you on the east coast, batton down the hatches, and God bless you and yours. Isabelle is on her way. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Reads like the butterfly I'm chasing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very very beautiful...and your added note enlightening. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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