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King of Hearts
Junior Member

since 2003-09-12

Posts 32

0 posted 2003-09-12 02:15 AM

(I am not a poet, just a guy in love, not as good as most of you on here. I wrote this for a girl i am in love with at work. She post her poetry here, so i hope she will see this and it makes her happy)

Enchanted dream you are,
love in bodily form,
every mans wish, desire,

Voice of an angel, sweet, tender,
eyes so sexy, beautiful,
lost in them I am forever,

Precious lips, flowing long hair,
feminine fingers, velvet touch,
Gods perfection, at you, my eyes stare,

Poetic, intelligent, witty, full of charm,
dream date, a drem love,
what man would not want you on his arm,

Roses in secret I will send,
my heart like rose petals in the wind,
red, velvet,everything you need,
I will be, your lover, best friend,

I watch you,you don't see me,
you are so full of grace,
in walked love, the first time I saw you,
your beautiful angelic face,

You don't know me, but I know you,
I love the fragrance of your hair as you pass by,
your smile so heavenly, puts a sparkle in my eye,

You are beauty, you are love,
you are kindness, happiness,
all the things I am in need of,

To just touch your hand,
i would be happy for days,
I want to dance with you,
romance with you, take you to operas, plays,

your eloquence is so charming,
your face, a love goddess,
your heart full of love, alarming,

One day you will notice me,
One day your love will come,
my heart will be set free,

Knowing you love me,
but for now i remain a secret,
hidden is my identity,

Enjoy my roses of love,
read my card, feel my caress,
let me see your happiness,

For now, your secret admirer,
love,(me)?

[This message has been edited by King of Hearts (09-12-2003 02:23 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-09-12 02:29 AM

I definitely think you are a man who is smitten--and a man who is also a poet!

Welcome to Passions! We love love!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

King of Hearts
Junior Member

since 2003-09-12

Posts 32

2 posted 2003-09-12 02:44 AM

Earth Angel, one of Gods angels hidding here on earth, your reply was greatly appreciated. I can't live up to the great poets here, just jotted down my feelings.

My heartfelt thanks angel.

[This message has been edited by King of Hearts (09-12-2003 02:44 AM).]

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-09-12 02:46 AM

King of Hearts~
I'd say you jotted down your feelings beautifully.
Your name seems quite fitting as well.

Welcome to Passions.

~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

King of Hearts
Junior Member

since 2003-09-12

Posts 32

4 posted 2003-09-12 02:51 AM

Vicky my hat off to you, you sure know how to make a guy feel welcomed, all of you poets, thank you. I never expected so much kindess.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-09-12 02:52 AM

I just love secrets!

good stuff here King...I hope she feels the same way about you

King of Hearts
Junior Member

since 2003-09-12

Posts 32

6 posted 2003-09-12 02:57 AM

Passing Shadows I hope so too,thanks for the green man haha...he sure is excited like me.Happy! secrets are fun! I agree!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2003-09-12 02:58 AM

well damn..........why don't men like this work for the sheriff's dept??? (sniff sniff)...ok anyway... welcome to the halls of passion...helen (ps send her a note, put flowers on her car...we women loveeee that stuff)

King of Hearts
Junior Member

since 2003-09-12

Posts 32

8 posted 2003-09-12 03:04 AM

slick lady..haha..you sure made me laugh!
thanks for the advice...maybe i will do that, i am afraid she will see me doing though..could have a buddy of mine do it for me...great idea...sheriffs dept...I had better watchout before I get busted! haha

heartpiper
Member

since 2003-09-02

Posts 57

9 posted 2003-09-12 03:26 AM

Taking care of "fine details" is one secret key towards bringing "serenity" to love.

Nicely penned

Regards,

Iyad

"Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers."
Khalil Gibran

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

10 posted 2003-09-12 04:22 AM

This is so sweet, whoever she is she will be happy to have such a beautiful poem written for her. Welcome to Passions!
All women want to be admired this way!
don't be so hard on yourself.Great job!

Hope to see more of your work!

~ARH ( A Romantic Heart)

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

King of Hearts
Junior Member

since 2003-09-12

Posts 32

11 posted 2003-09-12 04:45 AM

Dear heart...I think she has already viewed it...your sweet reply melts this kings heart..today i am all smiles! more work you shall indeed see....

[This message has been edited by King of Hearts (09-12-2003 04:47 AM).]

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

12 posted 2003-09-12 06:01 AM

A poet has just posted here
I'm sure that all can see
his words of love and romance
for his lady love to be

~0~

I welcome you to PIP
you seem to fit right in
your thoughts expressed are heartfelt
and come from deep within

You say you're not a poet
I question that, you see
a poet's heart, you clearly have
a poet you shall be!

~0~

~~~ A delightfully lovely first post!
A most fortunate lady she is!
May she know it SOON! ~~~

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (09-12-2003 06:17 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2003-09-12 06:57 AM

Welcome to Passions! All the best to you and your secret love...Please! Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2003-09-12 09:26 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very romantic and sincere first post!
I hope she sees this as I know she will be pleased.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

15 posted 2003-09-12 10:11 AM

Secret love, don't they make movies about stuff like this? Simply delightful, this is! Let us know how it turns out..

~ becky

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

16 posted 2003-09-12 12:21 PM

Methinks that secret is out of the bag.
Well done, new poet. Welcome to the blue halls of Passion. Stick around, as you are off to an excellent poetic start! Please keep penning your feelings and thoughts.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

17 posted 2003-09-12 12:26 PM

Am man in love indeed. Wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

18 posted 2003-09-12 01:14 PM

Hello, secret admirer!! This hopeless romantic
is loving this!! I hope to see more of your heart-felt
poems. I also am in love...and I also write from my heart,
so I'm going to enjoy reading you. I hope youe lady
enjoys this as much as we all have.
And, welcome....

Hugs

Ethel....garysgirl

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

19 posted 2003-09-12 04:16 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, but you ARE a poet, for love is one of the greatest gifts of the poet, and it is exactly words like these that are destined to make her swoon, and that is what poetry is all about...bringing the reader under your spell! (big hugggssssss) This is a beautifully romantic debut, sweet friend, go get her Romeo, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet King of Hearts, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2003-09-13 08:22 PM

Nice writing...silky flow...lucky you if she's that close...James

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

21 posted 2003-09-13 08:44 PM

Secret Admirer, this is an honest poem of love & I welcome you to Passions! Have fun here. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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22 posted 2003-09-13 11:37 PM

Guy in love....that's the very definition of a poet, and this lovely tribute to your personal angel is proof of it.

You may not think of yourself as a poet, but you clearly have the talent for it.

Write often.

Write what your heart sees and your eyes confirm.

And post it right here. It will be welcome.

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

23 posted 2003-09-14 08:48 AM

Hearts . . .
Welcome to PIP!
Beautiful entrance
and this one line
hit home:

love,(me)?

yes yes I know this
*smile*
xxoo

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

24 posted 2003-09-15 04:28 AM

A fine write... the person you are sending to should be honoured by your words...just be ABSOLUTELY sure that the woman in question is not already romanticaly invoved with another man...AND feels the same way...its a long way to fall when you are let down...

Goldenrose.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (09-15-2003 04:29 AM).]

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