Passing Tomorrows (inspired by Dixie)

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Open Poetry #28

Passing Tomorrows (inspired by Dixie)

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-09-14 02:50 AM

A flickering light
the candle against my pane
shadows no one knows

Find ground, hold on tight
accept all of which you gain
within passing shadows

Passing through the night
which cry's of the coming rain
as each of us grows

passing tomorrows

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-09-14 03:34 AM

very nice write n read,,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2003-09-14 04:37 AM

oh Craig

what am I gonna do with you?

a fine write, love the rhyme scheme, and the beautiful theme

thank you for the dance

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2003-09-14 11:48 PM

Thanks for your read and comments Q

Dixie ... the night is young and your words are like music.

Glad I could bring you a smile!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-09-15 03:52 AM

well

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-09-15 06:55 AM

beautiful just beautiful...h

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