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Open Poetry #28

Picture This

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-05 10:34 PM

Picture This

I have a picture
of you
in my mind
it might not
be accurate
pieced together
from separate times
made up
of whispers
tender sighs
some images
blur from view
others painfully clear
some could even be
things I wanted
to see
this picture
of you I have
in my mind

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-08-05 10:45 PM

It's accurate.....because it's what you see. Not what your eyes see, or will see, but what YOU see. So it's a perfect likeness, guaranteed -- until your point of view changes....

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-08-06 05:09 PM

we remember
~him~
in half truths
pretty lies
things we wish
he'd been
and
sometimes
just
sometimes
in the way he
was
and
is
.

this rocks H...into my library.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-08-06 05:49 PM

Nice...James

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-06 08:10 PM

Helen - the picture I have in my mind
forgets the pain . . . I see the good always and this . . . this is my curse

Yes, a beautiful write
xxoo

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

5 posted 2003-08-07 05:28 PM

1slick_lady, often times a mosaic turns out to be a masterpiece. enjoyed this very much.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-08-07 06:54 PM

enjoy your read

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-08-07 08:11 PM

sighs

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