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Open Poetry #28

Windowpain

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2003-08-06 12:38 PM

Windowpain

Colours pretense paints the prince
golden road paved through frame,
and I, hands open high
bend into his save.

But, this is just illusion
and fate has not yet bestowed upon me
the wings of a butterfly.

Regret pales this kaleidoscope of life
as I am surrounded by the hands
of a thousand clocks ticking on my soul
that "too late" is fast approaching.

My heart has too many blank pages
from books I never sought to read
like an unopened window of opportunity
made from fragile eyed glass
ready to shatter without warning
from tears that smear the windowpain.

By Melissa Long-Monette

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-08-06 12:54 PM

"My heart has too many blank pages"

melissa how you write me...hugs

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-08-06 01:07 AM

Seeing through the window to your pain, as you've described it so well. And I just want to say I appreciate how well you've written about it. ~K~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-08-07 05:07 PM

Colours pretense paints the prince
golden road paved through frame,
and I, hands open high
bend into his save.

Hmmmm, this awful pretty and so nice to read,
as is everything that you write~

Much enjoyed~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-08-07 08:36 PM

damn..aches it does

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