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Open Poetry #28

Peppermint Light

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-05 10:15 PM

Peppermint Light

could it be
you stand in
peppermint light
lined ribbons
of flavor
tenderly sweetened
stickily taken
out of hand

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-08-05 10:24 PM

Vividly beautiful.
Eric

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-05 11:31 PM

I can see this...

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2003-08-06 12:03 PM

i like this...

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends. Godsmack

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-08-06 12:07 PM

Nice, light, pepperminty fresh taste to this write!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-08-07 04:55 PM

You write such sweet stuff Helen~

Thank you for this neat treat!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2003-08-07 06:06 PM

bump, bump, bump, back up to the top.

enjoyed!

~Tier

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

7 posted 2003-08-07 06:36 PM

i liked this poem....

~bjw~

~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~

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