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We Are Gemini
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We Are Gemini |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Inspired by Nancy's poem "I Knew You"..... I guess the hopeless romantic in me is finally back?!! We Are Gemini  So shall you collect my eyes in stare of breathless unfold born of dreams of another heaven when God first weeped us in blend; Where once I knew you from long ago when we were beautiful combined. You were the water in the still deep of my fragrance within the woods. You were the sea flowing silk on sand in the tearful night that swam for miles shimmering the stars a destine drench as you hung the moon in my voice. You were the very essence of wind and I flew your wings then into the rise of time, into the now. Rewind; begin again thoughts meld as I breathe you in, two feathers, air to earth fate’s choreograph diving ocean’s wake. We drink skin velveteen and live a thousand lives rising down into the up of falling with intensity. For, we are Gemini, souls of twin flames through the ying and yang of life ever burning tomorrow’s forever. By Melissa Long-Monette   |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is just incredible blown away |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You...just wrote...what is-- and? worth waiting for... How do I thank you for this?  you just wrote a theme song, methinks.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
H*pe still smoulders..yes it'll happen for you M it's there all you have to do is be brave enough to take it when the time comes. This is simply fantastic writing through and through and it warms a heart to see that it still breathes in you no matter how hard you fight it. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a beautiful write this is, and the images are gorgeous, too!!! Enjoyed this as I sipped my morning coffee.....~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Melissa, this made me breathless. You made me remember that all this heartache is worth it. I have my memories..and you just brought them back. Damn, this is stunning. hugs to you gem xxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Honeybee - it's nice to see this romantic side of you again. Stunning write, and love those graphics... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Melissa... I am so pleased that I could inspire you... and to read your words and see your smile once again... Oooh I am so pleased. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I love it!  |
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