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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-11 10:44 AM



Point Across

today
I find myself
written across
the edges
on little scraps
letters scribbled
and unsent
of words
needed to say
a paper journey
through a mind
where I am
too full at times
pulled over
where ever I
happen to be
spilling on napkins
and bills
and whatever
coloring each
with emotion
and here
they all sit
a dusty clutter
waiting for you
to sift through

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-09-11 10:52 AM


sifting through the thoughts, the colors, the images... and creating something cohesive can be abig challenge at times...

as always... you paint the images well.


KristieSue
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since 2003-01-31
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2 posted 2003-09-11 11:26 AM


sounds like me....

nice job!!!!!

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
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3 posted 2003-09-11 11:57 AM


"of words
needed to say"

oh yes I know...

won't someone come and put them together?

I loved this!

Susan

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