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Open Poetry #28

Forever i will stay

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2003-09-10 05:56 AM

Let me stay in your tender kiss
I want to explore the deepest part of it
Floating in its softeness
Then plunging in its dark velvet heart

Lock me in your balsamic arms
Keep my safe in tranquility
Dissolve the hurts withyour gentleness
Shield my soul with your steel

Temper my soul to the warmth of your flesh
Hold me close enough to melt into your heartbeat
Then let time stop in this moment
Captured eternally in your love

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-09-10 06:13 AM

"Temper my soul to the warmth of your flesh
Hold me close enough to melt into your heartbeat
Then let time stop in this moment
Captured eternally in your love"

So beautiful is this. Wonderfully penned, June.
Hugs,
~Vicky
If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2003-09-10 08:31 AM

thank you vicky,
as i said iwas a little uncertain about this one so i am really glad you liked it. its nice to have you comment about the last part of it too.

hugs june xxxxxxxxxxx

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-09-10 04:41 PM

June~
The entire read was so tender~
Lovely, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-09-10 04:47 PM

Beautiful, and sweet..so nice to read...I don't know why, but I got a lump in my throat when I read this. Touched me so much. Thanks for sharing this.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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